~ This is my own made English essay on FOLKTALE as what my teacher wants. So, I would like to share it here. Maybe can be made as a references for you guys.
Original Idea n writing: Me! :D
Grammar and spelling checking: My TESL foundation friend, Wan. :D
Based on : Chinese Zodiac Legend
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Cat and Rat: The Legend of the Chinese Zodiac
A long, long time
ago, in the faraway land of China, there lived a cat and a rat. They were best
friends. Very, very best friend. They ate together, played together and they
even slept together. One day, the Jade Emperor, The Emperor in Heaven in
Chinese folklore; decided to hold a race among all the animals in the land. The
first twelve animals to cross the finish line would have a year in the Chinese
calendar named after them. This would be quite an honour.
“But! Winning the race will not be
easy,” warned the Emperor. “You must run through the thickest part of the
forest and then swim across the river at its widest part.” Hearing this
announcement from the Emperor himself, made all the animals became very eager
to take part in the once in a lifetime race. Even the powerful and mystical
dragon became interested and decided to join the race.
As fast a lighting, the news about
the race had widespread all over China. The cat heard about the race and dashed
off to meet the rat and tell him about the race. Now that they both had already
know about the race, they became enthusiastic to win the race. But then they
realized that they would be the smallest contestants in the race and it is a
disadvantage for them.
“We will never make it,” said the
rat sadly after giving a thought that their opponents would be much bigger and
stronger animals than them. “Don’t worry! We will make it. We’ll ask the ox to
give us a hand.” said the cat. The rat’s face enlightened a bit. “He always
wake up before sunrise. Maybe we can ask him to give us a ride. He will give us
a good head start.” So the cat and the rat convinced the kind and strong ox to
wake them up early on the day of the race.
The next morning, the ox was up
long before dawn. “Wake up, lazybones!” he said to the sleeping cat and rat.
“We had better get started.” So the cat and the rat climbed on the ox’s back.
But they were so sleepy that by the time they had fully awakened, they were
halfway across the river. The rat woke up first. He saw the Emperor standing at
the finishing line far, far away in front.
“Why should I share the glory of
first place with cat and ox?” the rat started to be selfish. He looked at the
cat, sleeping soundly. He then looked at the river. “Wake up, my friend!” cried
the rat. “Look! There are so many tasty fish swimming in the river.” The
innocent cat woke up immediately and closely took a look in the river. He
licked his lips. The swimming fresh fish made the cat drooled. At the same
time, the selfish cunning rat pushed the cat into the river.
Splash! The cat tumbled straight into the river. He looked at
the rat blankly, not realizing that the rat had betrayed him. The ox then
turned his head to see what had made the splash. He did not see the cat,
though. What he saw instead was the other animals in the race - and they were
close behind him. Without giving the cat and rat another thought, he sped
towards the Emperor.
And splish! splash! splish!
splash! Off the ox went, crossing the widest part of the river to the
finishing line. Just as the ox neared the riverbank, the clever rat leaped from
behind his ear and crossed the finishing line in first place. “How did such a
small animal win the race?” asked the Emperor in surprised. “I may be small but
I’m also smart.” replied the rat. He scampered up onto the winner’s podium. The
ox knew he had been tricked into second place, but he could only grunt in
dismay.
Back in the river, the cat tried
to swim in the strong current of the river. He hates water but if he had to
swim in order to win the race, he would do so. Behind him, he heard an animal
swim towards him. It was the king of animals in China, the tiger. The strongest
tiger struggled to overcome the strong current and when he was about to pass by
the cat, the cat asked him a favour. “Dear king of the animals, would you mind
to give me a hand in this strong current? I am nearly drowning.”
“I’m sorry, but I can’t.
I need to win this race.
The Emperor is waiting for me.”
And splish! splash! splish! splash!
Off the Tiger went, crossing the widest part of the river. The tiger came
roaring to the finishing line. “Am I the first?” asked the tiger hopeful. “No,”
answered the rat smugly. “You have to be awfully clever to beat me.” The ox
nodded. “And you had to get up extra early to beat me.” the ox added. So the
tiger assigned the third place.
Meanwhile, the cat was still
struggling going through the strong current in the river. At the same time, the
lucky rabbit had her luck when she discovered many rocks that can help her
cross the strong current river safely and with much more ease. The cat tried to
approach the rabbit and asked her for a favour. “Dear lucky rabbit, would you
mind helping me get onto the rocks so that I can cross this strong current river?
I am nearly drowning in it.”
“I’m sorry, but I can’t.
I need to win this race.
The Emperor is waiting for me.”
And hip! hop! hip! hop! off
the Rabbit went, crossing the widest part of the river to the finishing line.
And so the rabbit was assigned as the fourth winner. Just as the rabbit crossed
the finish line, the sky became dark and a great storm blew. The powerful and
mystical dragon appeared in the clouds above. He was so much, much too big to
run through the woods or swim across the river. So the Emperor had told him he
could race through the sky, braving the rains and the wind. As the dragon
descended down to the ground, he was assigned as the fifth finisher.
The Cat saw the dragon’s
appearance and he tried the best out of him to swim through the river. He swam
as fast as he could. A few moments later, he heard the sound of galloping
hooves in the distance. It was the strong elegant horse. As the horse was about
to pass by him, he called up to the horse and asked him a favour. “Dear strong
yet elegant Horse, would you give me a ride across this strong current river? I
am nearly drowning.”
“I’m sorry, but I can’t.
I need to win this race.
The Emperor is waiting for me.”
And splish! splash! splish!
splash! Off the Horse went, crossing the widest part of the river to the
finishing line. Just as he was about to set his foot on the finishing line,
suddenly the silvery snake came out of nowhere and startled the horse.
Startled, the horse took a few steps back, making it easier for the snake to
slither across to the finishing line and took the sixth place. Feeling annoyed,
the Horse crossed the finishing line and was assigned as the seventh winner.
“How come you didn’t realize that
the snake was there before you?” the Emperor asked out of his curiosity after
he saw how shocked the Horse was by the time he found out about the snake. “She
managed to hitch a ride on me secretly and I didn’t know when it happened.
Maybe when I was about to cross the river, Emperor.” The snake just grinned to
the Emperor while hearing the horse’s story.
On the other side of the
riverbank, the sheep, monkey and rooster had made a raft to take them across
the river as they are bad swimmers. Meanwhile, the strong and great swimmer,
the dog, had already swam across it. The trio then set off on their hand-made
raft across the river. The monkey paddled the raft, the rooster gave the
directions and the sheep stood at the back of the raft to give balance. Again,
the cat saw the trio and talked to the sheep without being noticed by the
rooster and the monkey. “Dear wise sheep, could you give me a secret ride on
you raft? I’m nearly drowning in this strong current river.”
“I’m sorry, but I can’t.
We need to win this race.
The Emperor is waiting for us.”
And splish! splash! splish! splash!
Off the trio went, crossing the widest part of the river to the finishing line.
Amazed by the great teamwork showed by the trio, the Emperor assigned the sheep
as the eighth winner, the monkey as the ninth winner and the rooster as the
tenth winner. But they were shocked to see that the strong and great dog
haven’t crossed the finish line yet. A few minutes later, the dog came wiggling
his tail. He won the eleventh place. “How come you came later even though you
set off earlier than us?” asked the monkey curiously. “I couldn’t resist the
water so I decided to play in it a little longer.”
“Now we already have eleven
winners. Who will be the twelfth?” asked the Emperor. “I just need one more
animal.” The cat who was still swimming hard in the river tried to catch the
Emperor’s attention by shouting; “Me! I will be the last animal.” But he was
too far away from the Emperor to make him hear his shout. That made him swim
even faster than before. Unfortunately for the cat, the pig was much faster
than him and rushed to the finishing line.
“Number twelve!” cried the Emperor
but the cat was still far away from the riverbank. The Emperor then asked the
pig what took him so long to finish the race. He said; “When I was running, I
got hungry and stopped to eat my lunch. But then I got sleepy and took a nap.
Luckily, I woke up just in time and rushed to win this race.”
“Congratulations to all the
winners! As I had promised, one of the months will be named after each and
every one of you according to the place that you had won.” said the Emperor.
All the animals were very happy and they all had a big party to celebrate their
winning with the Emperor.
The exhausted and lethargic cat
finally arrived at the riverbank only to see the joyfulness of the winners
especially the rat. Remembering how hard he had to go through in the river and
how humiliated he felt after the rat’s betrayal, he held a great grudge on the
rat. And from that point on wards, whenever he saw the rat, he always wanted to
kill him.
That is how the Chinese Zodiac and
calendar was determined; and that is also why the cat always chases the rat and
tries to kill it. So, when we see a cat chasing after a rat, it is actually for
the sake of their ancestor’s grudge that is passed down through generations until
now.
~THE END~
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#I really hope that my teacher give me high mark....


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